Monday 23 October 2017
100 WC challenge week #6
In Stanley Park there was 3 kids camping. What one kid names Jimmy did not know was that the other kids named Bob and Joe brought mannequin legs. When Jimmy went to the washroom Bob and Joe placed the legs in a small pond and put Joes boots and old ripped up pants on the legs and waited for Jimmy to return. When Jimmy returned he saw it, freaked out and started to dial 911 right when the police officer said " What is your emergency?" Bob said it was a prank.
They were in some BIG trouble.
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You have the beginnings of a story but it needs some work to make it a better story. Some lines are confusing and you repeat When Jimmy many times.
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