The Monkey Thief
"You need to tell us where you got this computer from." Demanded the Chief.
"OOO-OOO-AHH!" An upset monkey thief yelled.
"Sir, we can't understand him." Explained a police officer.
"It's ok, I speak monkey. He wants to see the computer." The Chief put the computer on the table and shoved it to the monkey. The monkey then shoves it off the table more violently. That's it. That's all the evidence gone. The Chief looked towards the monkey, but the monkey was gone.
The next day people reported a monkey creating havoc down the halls of Vancouver Police Department.
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